Another Poem

2004-09-21 · 4597 阅读
<P>Thinking of you</P>
<P>I am here, thinking of you, and imaging~~</P>
<P>I am sitting in the bus, imaging my seat occupied by you some day,</P>
<P>I then feel so cozy;</P>
<P>I am standing in the train, imaging you grabbing the same pole,</P>
<P>I then feel you holding my hand tight;</P>
<P>I am taking this escalator, imaging you standing on the same staircase,</P>
<P>I then feel you standing beside me,smiling;</P>
<P>I am walking slowly, imaging you emerge from the other side of the street,</P>
<P>I then feel my heart flying;</P>
<P>when i realise all these are just me imaging,</P>
<P>I then start sobbing~~</P>

Another Poem

Another Poem
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hello_babe LV7

发表于 21-9-2004 01:35:28 | 显示全部楼层

小狮租房
I think it still needs amendment so welcome to suggest some~~[em04]

hello_babe LV7

发表于 21-9-2004 13:42:08 | 显示全部楼层

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>潘多拉外传</I>在2004-9-21 9:43:30的发言:</B>

<P>I am standing in the train, imaging you grabbing the same pole,</P>
<P>haa haa...when i read this sentence...what comes into my mind is the picture in which you are in a train, holding onto a pole...perhaps resting your forehead on the pole and then staring into the space in front of you......really.......cute~ </P>
<P>haa haa...miss ya liao...how s your life ah?</P>
<P>sorry,for suggestion...i will think about it and tell u next time...</P></DIV>
<P>
<P>life is fine..</P>
<P>thank you for your imagination. You are definitely right! I am always daydreaming~~but if i look cute or not, haha, it can be very subjective o~~</P>
<P>take care</P>[em05]

潘多拉外传 LV5

发表于 21-9-2004 09:43:30 | 显示全部楼层

<P>I am standing in the train, imaging you grabbing the same pole,</P><P>haa haa...when i read this sentence...what comes into my mind is the picture in which you are in a train, holding onto a pole...perhaps resting your forehead on the pole and then staring into the space in front of you......really.......cute~ </P><P>haa haa...miss ya liao...how s your life ah?</P><P>sorry,for suggestion...i will think about it and tell u next time...</P>

hello_babe LV7

发表于 22-9-2004 23:07:52 | 显示全部楼层

<P>hope you all like this poem~~</P>[em04]

俊傑 LV5

发表于 23-9-2004 14:04:12 | 显示全部楼层

[em04]well done[em01]

hello_babe LV7

发表于 23-9-2004 20:23:56 | 显示全部楼层

thank you so much![em04]

折翼天使 LV15

发表于 24-9-2004 17:40:42 | 显示全部楼层

[em02]

苦口咖啡 LV5

发表于 24-9-2004 19:48:08 | 显示全部楼层

<P>very well</P><P>I think in girls' life, we always dream so much. unfortunately, these dreams will not come ture.</P><P> [em03]</P>

俊傑 LV5

发表于 24-9-2004 19:59:52 | 显示全部楼层

you can dream,you can achieve~~~![em04]
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